by Poet on the Piano Feb 19, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The overpowering ocean makes love to the sensitive seashore |
Yet in the real world? A naive poem beautifully written, hope your life keeps your head in the clouds and you never have to face the true disappointments that face people daily. I to hold a place in my heart for your untouched life and unbesmirched optimism, Keep on dreaming and praying and stay young. Life is really a cheap commodity in today's world as we worship money more than it and love is blown away through the lack of it. 5/5 Ray S |
by Ingrid
Ahh, what a beauty this poem is..MaryAnne you are growing up so fast, sweetheart..there is so much change in your language. I am deeply moved by your words and the pureness that speaks from them. |