by Star Feb 19, 2010
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
*This is a rough draft. Any and all comments/opinions are welcome.* |
by BlueJay
I know you wrote this long ago I mean posted it a while back and who knows how old it may really be, but the comment about it being a rough draft seems irrelevant because it's a pretty good piece as is. I mean the components are all here and the rhymes do not feel all that forced. |