Comments : Eradicated

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Such an eye catching title Jenn !

    Gosh I love how all your poems flow so wonderfully and just roll off the tongue.

    I swear I could sing them they have such a perfect rhythm.

    This earth will live after we're gone
    New life will take our place
    Maybe God will find his peace
    As death finds our embrace
    ^^^
    Magnificent ending stanza Jenn.
    The last 2 lines really make one think long and hard.

    Excellent read !