Kiss off Faith

by Donna   Feb 21, 2010


I looked upon the lord ...High up in the sky....
This i found strange . . As he never replied ...
My silent cries off need ..Never heard......
An unmarried mother.. Battered and bruised ..
I just had no faith .. To carry me on ..

Kiss off death .. Ive had so many times ..
Cut , Bleeding Broken on the floor ..

Tiny kids by my side . . Needing me so . .
Still i got up ... Tried tried again ...
A gentle smile they had . With a touch to ma face..
Tiny hand wiped my tears .. "Awww Mum" ..
With a very big hug ...

A gentle kiss on my cheek... This was all i needed.
A kiss of faith .. To carry on ....
From my very young son ...

xxxxxxx

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  • 14 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I read this and after that I started writing Shattered. It's a good thing in life to have someone to live for. I am too young to have kids, but I am aware of the fact that they can be a support and a burden sometimes.
    It is a wonderful thing that you're trying to be a good mother (something my mom never tried with me, too busy with my sister), and I really appreciate that. Life has many ups and downs, and to have someone to hold on, even though he's young, is a very uplifting thing.
    I like you put this poem into a story.
    Take care
    Carla :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Adelaide

    Wow, how amazing and powerful. I can feel the pain and the struggle to be a strong mother to your children. I am sorry for all of the suffering and abuse you have had in your life. Great poem!

  • 14 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    There were some spelling mistakes that you perhaps missed in a hurry? Off instead of 'of' and ma instead of my? Perhaps I am wrong?

    Other than that it was a wonderfully written poem. The imagery that you created gave me flashbacks of my own childhood. Keep in there.

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