by Michael D Nalley Feb 21, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
From cave drawings, maps and old writings of the ancient media |
I never did like the news. Too depressing. There should be a happy news channel or something... with headlines like "Bunny Found A Home!!" or "Poodles Learn To Dance!" Goodness, wouldn't that be something? I like your poem. It is just what people want to see I suppose... Look at something more depressing then their own lives. hehe???..? |
by Maria
Important message, I think. Media is evil, and we must look beyond it and find truth for ourselves. Hopefully someones eyes will open up after reading this poem of yours, and have a second thought at what is being fed to them. |
This poem is really good. Its short but you get right to the point of things. The flow is really good and the rhyming isnt forced. 5/5 |
by Cindy
This piece holds so much truth. Leaves the reader really thinking. I enjoyed the read :) |
I thought your poem was original and thought provoking, Mr x's comments just don't make sense as the rhyming pulls your poem together and makes it that much more readable. Mr x seems to have a rhyming fixation??? |