Shattered

by RoseBlood   Feb 22, 2010


Feeling of loss settled in the soul
Reality pretends to be a fool
Smiles on the lips, tears in the eyes
New day can bring no surprize

You won't be there anymore...

Years pass without a stop
Another part of the heart drops
Soon, there'll be nothing there
To stop the feeling of being alive, but dead

Yet, you wouldn't come back...

Questions fill the mind, but have no response
Wasting time, searching for remorse
The day of tomorrow is the same as yesterday
For nothing has changed since you're away

Still, you're there in the dreams...

Like a voice, haunting the sleepless nights
Sweet dreams, mornings are nightmares
The empty bed is filled with the parts of the heart
Because when it lost you, it had been torn apart

Life has no meaning without you...

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    Lovely poem! I like the way you wrote this, it was so moving. Your emotions were well expressed, very lively. I could picture it as i read. A poem like that is worth reading. Keep up the good wrok, 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 14 years ago

    by Donna

    That was so beautifull. So well written. I almost can feel the empty bed and laying alone .. Sad to .. Very well written . well done ..

    Donna

    Be safe and take care xx

  • 14 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    On the last line you put " thorn" when I think you meant to say " torn"

    the poem was great hun, it had a lot of detail in it and I like how you wrote it in third person..that added onto the feelings in it. Great job! ((5))

    Harlea

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By RoseBlood