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by PassionCourageTriumph Feb 22, 2010 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
Words like butterflies Whispering pleasant nonentities Wrap guiltlessly 'bout my subconscious Subliminal roots plunging Seeking for some thought Shamelessly gouging Gruesome fairytales with Gleefully dancing demons & Grotesque pixies Peering deep within my core Picking at the remnants Present from the destruction Daring to examine the things that make me tic Dreading what will come if they're caught Delving into a place so forbidden Forgiving as I am Fortune cannot tell the Fate of the traveler who slinks down a forbidden lane Looking for inspiration but Longing for a fight Leering at every stranger they observe Outside and in they search Obscure figures catch your eye Outrunning my involuntary contemplations Cursing as they drown Corresponding with their frustrations Contemporary mind readers lost within my retina Reaching for the pictures of hope that they see Rejected by my commiseration Released by my sensitivity
by Jim McMillen the man within
Your descriptive talent is so prevelant here ! & how ironic it is to have written a poem so well about your inability to express yourself in verse ...Simply amazing & very well crafted....Jim The Man Within...5/5