Comments : Suspended (Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    After reading this, I can close my eyes and see the frozen waterfall. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    OMG Rachel the imagery you created made me reflect back to the time when I was at my Aunt's in Bracebridge. Last Winter we went down there for the honeymoon and we went down to the little falls there. OMG it was amazing, so beautiful.

    It was exactly as your poem says "waterfall silenced" .... and the shimmer looked like diamonds.

    Absolutely stunning

    Thank you for the trip down memory lane with this little beauty Rachel.

    Loved it !!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    You are right dear:) I was typing too fast lol! And the poem was inspired by the frozen waterfall near my house:) I thought that too about the title but I couldn't think of another appropriate one that didn't give away the piece.....

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    This is so beautiful. I have a hard time with the Haiku. You took me back in time allowing me to once again see something I can no longer enjoy. I have so many memories of Cascade park.
    Excellent job!
    Love you
    Aunt Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I almost wish I could have seen this beautiful scene, a frozen waterfall.. I can only imagine how stunning it is. Loved this so very much, awesome job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such a lovely Haiku you have penned! I like
    this description very much:

    suspended in time
    frozen crystal shimmer!

    Well done with this form :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    This was oustanding. The imagery is so beautiful and I do love the last line

    Waterfall silenced

    While it is nice to hear the sound of a waterfall it must be spectacular to see it suspended in silent. Loved it!