Again I don't want to complain about a couple mixed up rhymes but if you choose to write a certain way it should be that way. The poem is excellent and I don't want people losing focus on whats important over a couple mistakes but its hard not to. I actually read poems and pay attention so I notice little things... ex. First stanza feeling and killing don't really rhyme even though they end with ïng" and then in the second part of the poem you rhymed away with heart and it threw me off again. Easily fixable...