Not rhyming... not a poem :P

Very heartfelt though, and well written... has a nice rhythm to it as well :3

I could tell you wove this straight from your heart, and the feelings hit me true like a cold winter's grasp on your skin. I like your style, simple but beautiful. The only thing I would add is to challenge yourself and experiment, try different styles and elaborate a bit more, be out of the box, throw your voice out there and let it be heard with confidence and creativity! I feel like you could add a bit more depth and unique lines, don't be afraid to try something new and remember always your work is appreciated and read. Never give up hope.

Enjoy this weekend to the fullest! :)

~MaryAnne