I really find this form on the tougher side but wonder how easy you made it. Dark & sad enough to give you goose bumps. |
by Meena Krish
Haunted nightmares stealing life |
by Sylvia
Cindy, you did a good job with the form. The poem is dark and made me feel that way when I read it. I feel a heaviness as I read each word. Well done. |
by Lu
Such a sad read Cindy. I feel your words so much because I know they come from deep within. |
Definitely a sad and dark write but very well done indeed. You can feel the writer's pain, emotion, everything. *hugs* |
by Lonely Rider
/Fate destroyed love's dream.// |
by Lonely Rider
/Fate destroyed love's dream.// |
by Lu
Congrats on the front page win Cindy ! |
Congratulations on your win dear, wish you would have been here to enjoy the moment..but am sure you will be here soon. |
by Corinne
Congratulations on your win Cindy. More strong writing that has come to be expected from you :-) |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice job on this form! I like the pauses...it was unique and added a little something different to this form and I think it made a greater impact. Congrats! |
by anand singh
First let me say congratulations on the win Cindy.It is most deserving of you. |
by Kuro
I think i would like to try a Tanka someday. nicely descriptive word choice. pretty dark sounding |
by Lana
Very descriptive piece you have penned here. I especially liked your last line for it summed up all the feelings previously listed. Very well done. |