I love this poem. Partly because my name is Antonia, but also because it was beautifully written. I feel the emotions that you were feeling. The flow was great. My favorite part was.

"my antonia
the woman i long for
miles, worlds, and years away
i will arrive at your door "

I hope you go back to her. 5/5

A girlfriend light years away!! lol a very interesting concept. unique indeed.

I think you really captured Jim Burden's feelings here--in such a short space, too.