by Martin Leach Jun 17, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
We tend to love what hurts us most |
Your poem has a good message.. You have wrote each line very nice. But i felt if you try to make it easier to reciete..it will be more interesting. I am not good at poems may be.. Just i felt it is nice when it has rhyme. |
nicely done again! ur poem proves a point. we are hurting ourselfs. very nice! |