Not bad I give it a 3/5 good stuff

My friend, you have penned a beautiful piece here that shows your love and belief in our heavenly father.
There is no power on earth quite like his and no love in this universe as pure as his.

In the final battle
In the end of time
You will be reigning
Forever God...

This verse captured it all, of his awesome love for us.
Take care my friend and keep walking in the faith.