Good job with the image contest and congrats on the tie for first place. Brought the lighthouse to life. Well done.

Raj
You did such a wonderful job with your tie winning poem. The piece you have pennned goes perfectly with the image you chose. Beautiful poem
Love Cndy

This poem stood out at me from the beginning of the contest, awesome job. congrats on the image contest

Acidic memories,
drenched me again
last night,

*I can really relate to that. I feel that way whenever the memory of someone comes back and I don't know how to handle it. I think you did a wonderful job with the image. Your words are soft and hold so much sadness and pain in them. I love the way this was written. It was simple but the emotions described can be different for anyone. I loved this piece hun, very well done. Nik*

Why still stands,
solitary lighthouse

^It feels like there is a word missing in here somewhere

Aside from this, I thought it was wonderful. Without even looking at the photo that inspired this, I think you did a great job and created a great image in the reader's head. I really enjoyed reading this, nice work.

^Why still stands,
solitary lighthouse^

This couplet is missing a word.....you need an a or a the before solitary and the first line is worded unnaturally. You could have worded it:

WHy a solitary lighthouse still stands

Still standing is a solitary lighthouse

something worded a little different that sounds more natural.

I know English isn't your first language so you get extra kudos.

I like the word choice, imagery and emotion.

Beautifulll!!! This poem is amazing and really touched me! I really enjoyed it and am so proud of you! Congratulations on the win!! You really deserve it... This was so beautifully written.. I love the imagery you've created. Wonderful job!