Well written

/Whyfor? I've got a heart
and a pen of many hands//

^^ very thoughful lines there ... well written...

besides, the sky cares not about my whether-
thereupon defeatism seems juvenile in itself,
with its slightly tattered ideas
all bound for
over-thinking

^^ loved the imagery in these para ... brilliant...

wonderful write...

Another unique and deep write. Very well penned and look forward to reading more.

Very nicely written n well crafted.