Sylvia
Your words have painted such a sad story to go with the dark image. Feelings of pain sadness and loss of hope filled my mind as I read your piece.
Great job!
Love Cindy

I think your image poem fit with perfection, sad and heart breaking. But done with good vision of the sadness within the picture

What a powerful write Sylvia. Beginning with despair... Ending in a different yet shocking way.

Brilliant. A 5

Very sad and emotion filled. could definitely see this image as I read your poem. felt like I was in this picture myself. great job.

When love is lost & death holds our mind, it
leaves us in a dark world...I like the images
and the emotions you created in this write.
Well done with the challenge!

How does the Beginning sound?
Nice Write, 5/5

I agree this is very impressive.

For me I find this a very realistic write as so many took that finall leap in a situation such as this.
It is vividly portrayed and well penned.
Paul...

Wow, you really know how to write a good poem...5/5...This really is great....I have poems too....