Comments : Much Misery To Hide

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You nailed it again Walah. People who are really miserable usually put on a show for others so no one will know, but it's not hard to see them are they really are. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Walah
    What a release of emotion in this sad piece. Hope this person realizes what she is doing before it is to late to make ammends.
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    She sits and plots for a revengeful end just because she can,
    Destroying herself and those around her for a negligent man.
    ^^
    love can be painful but that doesnt mean we should destroy ourselves ...

    She can take all her diamonds, her money and her crap,
    Place it in a Golden cage just as good as a trap.
    And in a few years when the wrinkles appear and she has much grown,
    She'll realize that her material world has left her alone.
    ^^
    indeed those who live only with their material possession... will be alone in the long run...

    a sad but wonderful write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow sounds like a lot of anger in this piece & I dont think this was made up but feel its a real poem about a real person, I would not like to be the one on the receiving end of this lol, such words.. wow. I liked the one line about those who fake happiness have a lot of misery to hide, thats true.. so many of us smile when really we're undergoing so much misery & sadness. perfection are your words. well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You are right, those who act to be happy are the ones who are truly miserable.
    They also take pleasure in making others miserable as well! I agree with you!