by KJ
Nothing that I would ever what to forget |
I know how bad it hurts to remember a love you don't have anymore but the truth is fighting through it will make you a much stronger person. We all know the risk of love before we pursue it but we can't seem to live without it so the risk is worth the reward. Good job 5/5 |
by Su
Love it! |
Very lyrical and heartfelt all at the same time. The use of comtempary language gave it a down to earth flavor. Overall I enjoyed reading this well written poem |
This was really sad and heartfelt. it's upsetting to know that things don't always work out the way you wish deep down in your heart they would. keep it up :) |
by Kaila
Well first off I think you need a little more structure in your stanzas. I thought the syllabol count was a little off. I also think you can be more descriptive emotionally, like can you use other words beside like sad and things like that. Overall the nice job. 3.5/5 |
by Cale
This is another great poem!! You have some amazing talent!! Keep up the great work!!! |
by Cale
This is another great poem!! You have some amazing talent!! Keep up the great work!!! |
by Mello193
Good and sad, loved it |