Honestly for your first attempt you did a fantastic job, could have fooled me I thought for a second this was the only style you wrote in haha So many words can describe love, I mean it doesn't really matter what you say it has relevance somehow. So it wasn't really the words you said but how you used them. The fact you started the poem with words of hope and excitement the things we all feel with a new love. But then you finished strong with words of regret and sorrow and that is often how it plays out in real life. I loved that the poem ended with the words we all feel when love ends. Fantastic piece truly and as far as changing things I wouldn't because these are the words you use to describe love and nobody else feels the same way towards it. 5/5 definately

Are you kidding me? KJ this was awesome! Like Karl said, you fooled me as well! I wouldn't of been able to tell if it was your first shot at this form or not.
You're writing is always beautiful no matter what style it is. Your word choice was awesome. Love is sooooo many words and I enjoyed the ones you choice. And I LOVE how you ended it with hate....Complete opposite feelings, smashed into a tiny piece of poetry, it was great!

I liked this but i wasn't really connecting with it. i do love the topic you chose. the difference between love and hate is very powerful.

Dude this is really great!!! i loved it the topic was amazing and the expression was amazing i love thi sone