I want to know

Original and well written, the honesty of the words helped the words flow effortlessly.

No more imaginary lullabies
sang to keep the demons
away. I want real arms to
shelter me, real lips to kiss me
real eyes to gaze into.
Fiction can't remain the
path I walk on...

This last verse is the one that really stands out for me, for it used to be my feelings
at one time...beautifully penned! I understand
your feelings.

Aww what a cute poem. . . love sure is magical. . <3

This write made me shiver, Nik. Absolutely divine. not beautiful, not wonderful, i mean divine, with two lines underlined beneath it.

All of us want to feel that.. i especially liked this stanza. It hit home..

"No more imaginary lullabies
sang to keep the demons
away. I want real arms to
shelter me, real lips to kiss me
real eyes to gaze into.
Fiction can't remain the
path I walk on..."

A definite 5 for me, girl..

What I really like about this poem is that people really tend to have a problem admitting this, and it's such a reliefe to read that you're not the only one out there who feels this way. I also love your choice of words, and the way you described things. Your words danced right off of the page, 5/5!

mandy :)