Golden sand in the hourglass flows
It falls like effervescent rain, and the storm never slows
The jewels of light are always falling...cascading
Each one a unique second, yet they're always fading

I really liked this stanza. Very deep and vivid. You have a very...high vocab in ur wiritng and it makes it interesting even if i dont personally understand it.lol. ur very talented...great job.

victoria