Chicken Soup - Naming a Best Friend

by Chicken Soup   Mar 1, 2010


"In prosperity your friends know you,
in adversity you know your friends." -Confucius

Where is the peril?
When is the pain?
Why is the sorrow?
What is the gain?
Being bitter?
Salty rain?

Peril's inside,
pain comes along,
tragic the flame,
lessons to gain.
Being bitter, to getting better.
Salty rain, and raising rainbows.
But,
you will need a warm shoulder.
For that
I am here,
and here I'll stay.
To watch your every tear,
to cross then to fade.
I am the chicken soup,
to your cold.
Search for me,
you know who I am.
I've always been there,
in the good and bad times.
You know my name?
I am called your best friend.

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    I enjoyed this one by you. its different but a good different. loved how in the end it was a friend.
    great job.

    victoria

  • 14 years ago

    by Peace And Dinos

    It was lovely.
    I like the beggining

    "Where is the peril?
    When is the pain?
    Why is the sorrow?
    What is the gain?
    Being bitter?
    Salty rain?"

    It really has a nice flow through the whole poem. It is nice and it makes you think.

  • 14 years ago

    by liiz

    Love it! and is that where u got ur user name from?