by Chelsey Mar 2, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm mad, I'm bitter; I don't know what to do |
This is a really nice piece. at times i feel this way...lord knows i do...but at the end of the day i still love the persom i'm with....great job |
by KJ
Ah! I loved this poem eh. You have a way with words that is simply amazing. What I liked most about this write is the format: in each stanza the last word rhymed. Excellent flow as well. |