I want to tell you

by XXlonelyXX   Mar 2, 2010


**** please tell me what you think *****

a smile would lead to hugs
hugs lead to a kiss
this is what I'm gonna miss

to have you hold me ever so tight
sitting still in the moons light

with your arms wrapped around me
i dream forever thats were i will be

as i look in your eyes so blue
i know you don't have a clue

if only i could tell you
how much i love you
and everything you do

my tears would end
because i would be with you

I want to tell you
how much i care
i want to tell you
but i just sit and stare

in fear i sit and watch you
accept the things i can not say
i just wish
that you would be mine one day

I so want to tell him how i feel but I'm afraid that it will ruin our friendship =(

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steven

    It's always hard to tell someone how you feel... i'm sure many been in your shoes.. scared of a rejection and not sure if they like you... that's how hard it gets sometimes.. but it's true! haha love your style and love how it flows! keep up the good work! love to see more!

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I like the premise and emotion behind the poem, the fear I think we have all faced at some point that we could be rejected, so we just sit holding on to this image in our head, pining away. The flow of the overall piece was totally off for me though, the rhyming could have been better, it was a little cliche and stop and go. keep working on nit though, it has potential

  • 14 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    5/5...It's not easy to tell someone you like them, but give him hints....he just might like you the same way...good luck with this...I have several love poems you may look at also if you want.....

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