Excellent flow and some really interesting vocab, I love the imagery you used when you talk about age pulling at the mind. I'm not even sure if you were trying to do this but it built a crystal clear picture in my head. Which is another great thing about this poem, it's so honest and natural, not at all forced. This is usually the part where I would point out something that I think could be improved upon but for this one I can't. Short and sweet, I love it.