Comments : Stars (Pleiades)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You really pulled me in with the first line, just loved it. the rest of it was amazing, awesome job on the form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    "splendid, seductive stars"

    yes these stars are amazing and they do know how to seduce the heart.
    Well done with the form challenge!

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    You've taken one of Gods creation and turn it into something so beautiful in only a few words.
    The stars do mesmerize us from the begining of time.
    An enjoyable read indeed.
    Paul...