Once again the poem was great until you ruined the rhyme scheme in the last couple stanza's, I'm not sure why you did that? First and third lines rhymed the whole poem then you didn't rhyme those lines the last 2 stanza's and it would have been so much better if you kept the original style. I won't downvote based on that but I think changing the last 2 stanzas would be a good idea... nicely done otherwise