My hands

by WonderingSpiritDiaries   Mar 5, 2010


I'm so hurt that I look down on my left wrist
And see all the blood coming out
Of the little opening of my vein.
Then I see on my right hand
An object so sharp at the point
Where some of my blood is on.
This marks my new horrible terrifyinq life.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ares

    I usually don't really care for short poems, because I find it too constricting and it's harder to get it all out.

    However, this worked out perfectly. You've packed together all this information and the emotion really jumps out at you which as a writer is really hard to accomplish. Also, the end line was perfect. I was really hoping for a good line to end the poem and you delievered perfectly.

    A great poem and I'm going to keep reading your poems from now on. Great job.

    --ares

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