Scintillating flesh of liquid chambers
spin prisms on the world,
as dewdrops to a spider's web
they whisper hue into the air,

A very nice & vivid description of a bright day..liked this.

now melancholy blood may seep
into the boards of Nature's hearth,
a hint of dreary day to weep
upon the clouds of moonlight's birth.

THis is also another good part of describing
nightfall..excellent write!