Okay, um what to say...well first off I'll say I enjoyed it. Then I'll go on to say the it didn't seem to flow quite as well as your other poems that I've read, it seemed to randomly start and stop rhyming in places which made it seem kind of disjointed. But it was still enjoyable to read and very relate-able.I hope you don't really believe that your nothing. You are an excellent poet and I'm sure you have many other talents as well as people that care about you.

4/5 and only because I'm comparing it to your other writing.