Comments : Used

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    You have really managed to let the readers feel, what it's like to feel used.The the choice of words were cleverly used to weave this craft.

    I drop to my knees crying
    Sweet tears of freedom
    Plummet to my wounds
    Leaving mental scars

    ^^^
    I totally adore how you phrase these lines.

    Excellent Job