Heart Of Fire

by TheRaven   Mar 7, 2010


With a heart of fire
And breath of gold
All I can see
Is a sight to behold
Eyes so seductive
A vision of romance
I can't look away
I'm captive to a trace
Hypnotic compassion
A voice that brings chills
When you come nearer
Your presence thrills
I try to save my breath
But you just take it way
This feeling I feel is so surreal
I can only hope to contain
I dream of you voice
It lulls me to sleep
I pray thy lord
You existence to keep
I'm falling in love
With the figure I see
An angel from heaven
A saint just for me

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  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    A really great poem, just a few words that you missed a leter or two but all in all its still eally good.
    This was a nice break from the normal configuration of poems, 4 lines= one stanza etc.
    But as a suggestion try to clear up the flow. The beginning is great but then it kinda threw me off when you said, "This feeling I feel is so surreal" that can be trimmed down
    But again its just a suggestion, its ur poem :) 5/5

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