How can I deal?

by Nikki   Mar 8, 2010


I just sit here
want these tears
to fall from my eyes,
this broken heart
cant take no more
I feel the pain
running through my veins,
how can I deal?

You were the best of me
and Im lost without you
I'll never have what
I was looking for in you
I had it,but now I lost it through all these emotions

The smile on your face
was the thing that got me
through each and every day,

Days without you here
By my side
Is the worst feeling

I dont think I can
go a day without seeing you,
When you're here
I dont think I can
I dont think I can
survive this,high school
without you

When you're not there
It's so empty and cold
I feel so lost and alone
And all these feelings
come seeping in
How can I deal?

I'm lost without you
You're all I need
You're all I want

When I see your smiling face
light up this room
I cant help but smile too
You glow like the sun
on a hot summer day

When I hear your voice
It's music to my ears
It's so comforting
And makes me feel
Like I'm not alone

when you look at me
I feel you can see
right through me
You feel
what I feel

When I look into these eyes
I find comfort in you
Comfort I've never
Felt before

When I look into those eyes
I feel your saying
"everythings's going to be okay"

without you here
How can I deal?
Please don't leave
I need you here
with me
I cant survive this
without you
How can I deal?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    It was described as a sad poem and a sad poem it was. Aching without loved ones is a terrible sight for anyone. Doubt always conquers positivity and you showed that ideal very clearly int this piece. Great job

  • 14 years ago

    by ADyingProphet

    Well I like the story's meaning and the flow of the poem. However I would work on using better description, your poem is full of too many unoriginal lines, such as "I feel so empty and cold" I would work on using different words to describe your meaning...don't be afraid to use more complex words, but be careful to not over use them so its a diatribe that no one understands. You want to capture your readers attention with orgininality they've never heard before, that's what makes a great work. Hopefully my critque wasn't too brash. Good poems, just tweak it up a little that's all.

    Comment on my latest two please...thank you :)

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