This was amazing. i loved the heart and feeling in it. i also really love that you have come to the realization and the point in your life where you're comfortable with the way your life will go. that it may be tough at times, but you know that it will be so much better in the long run. that's probably one of the toughest things to realize for many of us. i'm still searching for that feeling. amazing job with this. :)

I will start with what struck me the strongest
in this striking poem is that I was surprized the way it ended

I love it

"Save me from the claws
Of inhumanity and leave
The look on your face
Can never bring me release
From the power I hold
To just walk away"

The flow and imagery in this section are fantastic, I also love the words "today I sign this goodbye with a smile of the truth." It's very powerful and a very relevant way to kind of summarise what you've been saying all along.

The only criticism I have is that the flow was sometimes a little off, perhaps because of the uneven line lengths? But then again that may have been the effect you were going for (I know I've done it in the past).

Overall good job, I'll be back to read more of yours in the future!

Em xXx

Wow. That was impressive. Powerful ending, great imagery...my favorite part of the poem was "But the freedom of it all floats
On silhouetted skies
And shattered dreams
From the millions of angels falling,
Wings ripped from their sewn seams"

The entire poem was awesome, but that part just rings, and the image sticks throughout the entire poem. Well done. 5/5 from me ;D

I call this type of poem a realisation poem. I think this is one of the best I have read in a long time as it enfolds the longing to get someone off your chest and out of your heart yet it still hold a certain amount of doubt of the feelings you shared with the one you probable loved deeply.
Though not the best in flow and meter it holds all that is good in an excellent poem so I will give it a 5/5 Ray S

I loved this poem!! It was filled with lots of emotion!!! THe flow seems like it fit well and it was a great over all poem!!! Great work!!

Very nicely written. Your words were beautiful, and your word choice was great as well. You put such emotion into this piece, and I was lured in from the beginning. The flow was great, and

I don't want to suffocate
In the barriers of your needs

I absolutely loved these lines. Very relate-able. 5/5

To begin let me say that I enjoyed your words and the meaning you placed behind them. I would have preferred that your rhythm/metre be more consistent throughout and that you sought a little assistance with a couple grammatical aspects. I guess this is my being old and "old school" in my poetry.