**He's slept with many
He's slept with much
All he wants is sex
Don't let him touch**

this is my very favorit line you know if this is a true story then wow i connect with you there, i had a boyfriend that was like this everyone told me to stay away but he told me he had changed and he was great with words and he was cute. well in the end he got what he wanted he was my first and after he took that from me he broke with me so i feel for you

this peice was amazing though and it was really an attention getter this is in my favs and so are you keep it up and keep in touch with me
-Courtney

Well written, good visualization...nice job :]

Awww this is sooo true. Most guys do look for sex in girls. N u writing it like this was truly amazing well done

5/5 from meeee xxx

Excellent; extremely well written. C'est magnifique. 5/5