Great poem, well written my friend. |
by Dreamofolwin
Another deep poem well expressed, Lol. I love your rhyme and flow in your poems... its excellent! Bravo.. :) |
by Sylvia
Life can be full of pain and can torture us if we let it and feeling pain rather than being numb lets us know we are alive. This is an excellent read, the flow is good, the rhyme is not forced. Well done. 5/5 |
My fav. line is the one that says "sinister colors paint my wall" You really know how to use deep symbolisom . ^_^ |