by Kianna Mar 10, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
You've broken this girl. |
I can relate to this alot;; i loved the words u used and how you positioned them throughout the whole sceme. 5/5 (: hang in there...if i can..you can. |
by X Harlea X
Wow Bunnie, you made a great point and expressed extreme feelings in this poem. Great Job Hun. (( 5)) |
by Mask of Pain
I really like your poem . good job. |
Broken ona way , love has betrayed my needs |