Broken ona way , love has betrayed my needs

I really like your poem . good job.

Wow Bunnie, you made a great point and expressed extreme feelings in this poem. Great Job Hun. (( 5))

Harlea

I can relate to this alot;; i loved the words u used and how you positioned them throughout the whole sceme. 5/5 (: hang in there...if i can..you can.