In my opinion this is not only well written but very powerful and thought provoking

I highly enjoyed ur poem. Especially the ending I love when endings of poems really make you think. Great work! 5/5
Such a sad topic :( but it makes for a great work of art such as this!

It seems kinda quick and rushed if you extended it a bit... but its your choice but still it was meaningful and thought provoking which is what really matters there was alot of emotion that really seems lost in a world like this but you did a great job the poem was really good!!