by Superman Jun 17, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I wait for your call with tears in my eyes. |
by something
hey-it was a good poem-keep writing yeah- i somtimes get that urge too, of just writing something down even if it isnt true. it helps to get my feelings out |
by BaybeBlew
Hey, thats was a pretty good poem, you might want to think about re-wording it or rhyming every second line, it didn't flow so well. It was a good idea to write about though, don't take the creative critism to heart, i'm not trying to be mean, keep writing. |