We Were and It Was

by PinkyPrincess   Mar 13, 2010


We started out strong
But ended weak
It went from right to wrong
And now we can't even speak

We fell in love and it was fun
We stood by each other's side
I truly believed you were the one
I thought we would last the long ride

We struggled through it all
We tried to hold on tight
But couldn't prevent our fall
Even with all our strength and might

So much hurt, so much pain
We had so many hopes and dreams
It really is such a shame
Nothing is ever as it seems

I was ready to fight
I wanted it to last
It started out of spite
And it ended so fast

You were in a different place
And we didn't anticipate
The problems we'd face
I thought you were my soulmate

It was that special, first love
The kind that took full control
It was the kind we dream of
The kind that took my soul

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    First loves are always like that..they leave a
    lasting impression in our hearts..take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by AngelsTears

    I thought the poems also deserved a 5/5. :) Really good. This one really called out to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cody B

    So much hurt, so much pain
    We had so many hopes and dreams
    It really is such a shame
    Nothing is ever as it seems

    *Very much true, loved how you worded it.

    I love the way you expressed yourself in this poem and thought that you ended it very well too. I thought overall the poem was excellent and definitely 5/5!

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