Comments : Untraceable Pain

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is a lot like my poem "My Love". Release the pain that I have been feeling myself. The need for love & hope to fill this emptiness.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauran

    Cale,
    This is such a deep poem,
    & I want to take you under MY wing.

    I love you Cale.
    <3

  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I haven't a word to say. Not by how good it is, but the contents. So rich with emotion... just dripping with it. I hope you are doing well. . . . . . . ....

  • 14 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow you did a great job on capturing the feeling that alot of people expierence and wether or not your going through it yourself you still managed to put it into words that expressed that feeling we feeling of hopelessnes and longing for release you did a great job!! :)