by jojo Mar 13, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Dear God, I know you are quite busy |
by DoRk
This type of poem is true but there isnt always an answer to everything. u can keep asking god but i bet he doesnt even know sometimes. think bout karma. great poem tho |
Well i like the first two stanzas the best, but that doesn't mean the rest is bad. this poem makes a really good point that i'm sure everyone thinks about. you did a really good job of transforming this thought to words. great write |