Well i like the first two stanzas the best, but that doesn't mean the rest is bad. this poem makes a really good point that i'm sure everyone thinks about. you did a really good job of transforming this thought to words. great write |
by DoRk
This type of poem is true but there isnt always an answer to everything. u can keep asking god but i bet he doesnt even know sometimes. think bout karma. great poem tho |