This poem would sing better if you put the word red in the last line < thats what you
get when you trust a little red pill> 5/5
as far as being gilable, we all are at sometime, the secret is to learn from your
mistakes or you will repeat them,its that
easy don't put it in your body and no more
problem. its that simple.

I agree, I will edit it to make it sing better and as far as i'm concerned I am never doing that shit again.

Hey I like your poem. I added you on my favorites. Just out of curiosity what's the little red pill