It makes me question the nature of faith itself. Is it more ignorant to accept or reject it? but yes, let us have freedom to explore the mysteries that are unseen. well written, great subject, but it reads a little bit choppy, but that may just be me. some word choices seem forced but it conveys the message well. I like this

I like the message. But I think you can improve the voice of the poem by taking out the rhyme. Just a suggestion, think outside the box, in poetry, rhyming.

5/5 amazing