Comments : Counting On Love

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is beautiful, Lol. So full of love for your special lady. I loved it. Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    RE: "This one's my only."
    Around here we say:
    "You're my one.."

    This piece is like a braid...
    a beautiful and well-formed,
    embellished with amber beads,
    braid....
    a pleasure to see..

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely poem, Larry. I have to say, the first stanza thoroughly intrigued me and it was fascinating to see your explanation for it unfurl throughout the following stanzas. A clever little piece indeed!
    All the very best,
    Ben