by dontlookpassmytears Mar 16, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She sits in her favorite spot all day |
Thank you so very much. |
by Jad
A moving short poem that I do believe many young girls can relate to at having separated families. I live with neither my father nor mother so i know how this feels and you have portrayed deep loneliness in these lines. I was taken in by the first line until the last and you did a great job describing everything else in the poem. Great job and keep writing. |