by Cody B Mar 16, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
*Something a little different. Not very good in my own opinion but it was easy to write. |
Very thoughtful. I like how you incorporated the same theme all the way through. Good job. |
by Sylvia
Your words bring to mind a writer sitting under a tree with pen in hand poised to write about the person they loved and that left them. Memories stirred by things they see and wishing the love that left would return to them. It is well written and I like the repetition of the same line for the beginning of each verse. Good job with this. |